Write that Essay Sentence.

The "ed" sentence.

Try starting your sentence with the ed from of the verb it makes for a punchy start to a sentence. 

Remember the rule:  

When you have finished your ed phrase, please a comer then write the rest of the sentence. 

Some -ed words - surprised, acted, angered, possessed, committed, concentrated, undaunted, horrified, petrified , surprised. 

Twisted... Why does my hair tie always get tangled in my hair? Ugh, it is so annoying!

Disadvantaged, but he keeps persevering, hes so small and all the other boys in his team are so big.

 

The "power sentence" 

If you find you waffle, try using a power sentence Begin your paragraph with a power sentence of 12 words or less. Get straight to the point. 
Examples:
Quality coaching is fundamental to sporting success. 
Early starts decrease student learning outcomes. 
What is right, isn’t always popular. 

School is important, you need it for the future.

The ‘Red, White and Blue’ Sentence:

Use the red, white and blue sentence style when you have several ideas to convey about a topic. 

Examples:
Successful students are focused, punctual and hard working. 
The Earth’s key resources are clean air, fresh water and natural environments. 
Sunshine, water and friends make for a perfect weekend adventure.

 

Friendship means, Honesty, Laughter, Emotional Support.

Independent task.

Screaming, so loud... What is happening, darkness surrounds me..

Lurking... A black figure follows me... Hides in the bushes when I turn around.