I am a Year 9 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave a comment.
Thursday, July 8, 2021
Social Studies.
My Learning Story | |||||
Hurumanu: 2 Humanities | Module: Power to the People | ||||
Name: Emma Austin | Teacher: Ds | Term: 2 | |||
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Reflection: Give at least three examples in each of the boxes below. | |||||
What We Did:
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What I Learned:
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My Favourite Parts:
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My Next Steps:
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CARR Values: Make a statement below describing how you showed each of our CARR values during this Hurumanu. | |||||
Commitment I committed to finishing my work. | Achievement I achieved this by getting up in front of the class and doing a speech. I also finished all of my work. | ||||
Resilience I pushed through even when things went wrong. | Respect I showed respect to my team members. | ||||
Feedback for my Teachers: | |||||
Tuesday, July 6, 2021
Persuasive Essay English - Juveniles should be tried and treated as adults.
Juveniles should be tried and treated as adults.
Juveniles get away with murder, rape and other terrible crimes… It’s very serious and no one should get away with it, something needs to change. This issue not only happens in New Zealand but all around the world.
Every day, young people under the age of 18 commit murder, rape, and other horrible crimes. Why should they be given special consideration?
People understand that making errors as a teenager is unavoidable. I'm not suggesting that if a teen enters a mall and shoplifts, they should be tried and sentenced to a year in prison. Perhaps not.
However, no matter how old a person is, murder or rape are not crimes committed without deliberation on the part of the perpetrator. Any adolescent who tortures and murders another person, or commits rape, or any other extreme crimes of the sort should not be treated as a child and should not be permitted to get away with it. We continue to foster the rot that is slowly but steadily undermining the earth by allowing them to get away with crimes.
People do not condone the fact that these kids are committing disgusting crimes, something needs to change. The time is now, let's get these juveniles jailed and get justice for the ones affected.
There should be no justification. Criminals who commit crimes are criminals, and we should not allow their age to keep them on our streets, living among us and, in many cases, committing additional crimes. Teenagers should be held
Here are some statistics from New Zealand.
In 2019 there were 1,503 children and young people in court, and in 2020 there were 1,584 which proves that it is increasing over the years.
Only 20% who committed a serious offence got home detention and were tried as adults.
In conclusion, evidence proves that juveniles get away with murder and therefore they should be tried adults.
Monday, July 5, 2021
Dame Whina Cooper.
Who is Dame Whina Cooper?
Dame Whina Cooper was born on the 9th of December 1895.
Dame Whina Cooper is from Te Karaka.
Why is she famous? Dame Whina Cooper is famous for leading the famous 1975 land march. She was also a activist in fighting for Maori land rights.
Write that Essay Sentence.
The "ed" sentence.
Remember the rule:
Some -ed words - surprised, acted, angered, possessed, committed, concentrated, undaunted, horrified, petrified , surprised.
Twisted... Why does my hair tie always get tangled in my hair? Ugh, it is so annoying!
Disadvantaged, but he keeps persevering, hes so small and all the other boys in his team are so big.
The "power sentence"
If you find you waffle, try using a power sentence Begin your paragraph with a power sentence of 12 words or less. Get straight to the point.
Examples:
Quality coaching is fundamental to sporting success.
Early starts decrease student learning outcomes.
What is right, isn’t always popular.
The ‘Red, White and Blue’ Sentence:
Use the red, white and blue sentence style when you have several ideas to convey about a topic.
Examples:
Successful students are focused, punctual and hard working.
The Earth’s key resources are clean air, fresh water and natural environments.
Sunshine, water and friends make for a perfect weekend adventure.
Independent task.
Wednesday, June 23, 2021
Mini Open Top Pastry Savouries.
Mini Open Top Pastry Savouries.
Ingredients.
Team notes:
Pictures.
Tuesday, June 8, 2021
Why schools should start at 10 am.
I believe that schools should start at 10 am because:
Students and teachers wouldn't be as tired. Being less tired means people would be more focused. More focused means more learning.
Teachers and students wouldn’t be so rushed in the morning, which means that people won’t forget stuff, and it’s also better for your mental health.
Having better mental health means that students would get a better view on school and it is also better overall.
Students would more likely come to school, better attendance. Which also means they will learn more as they are there more of the time.
More learning = better future.
Students will be a lot better, which means they are nicer to teachers and that means that the teachers will be happier and they will be nicer to the students.



