Persuasive Essay English - Juveniles should be tried and treated as adults.

    Juveniles should be tried and treated as adults.

Juveniles get away with murder, rape and other terrible crimes… It’s very serious and no one should get away with it, something needs to change. This issue not only happens in New Zealand but all around the world. 

Every day, young people under the age of 18 commit murder, rape, and other horrible crimes. Why should they be given special consideration?

People understand that making errors as a teenager is unavoidable. I'm not suggesting that if a teen enters a mall and shoplifts, they should be tried and sentenced to a year in prison. Perhaps not.

However, no matter how old a person is, murder or rape are not crimes committed without deliberation on the part of the perpetrator. Any adolescent who tortures and murders another person, or commits rape, or any other extreme crimes of the sort should not be treated as a child and should not be permitted to get away with it. We continue to foster the rot that is slowly but steadily undermining the earth by allowing them to get away with crimes.

People do not condone the fact that these kids are committing disgusting crimes, something needs to change. The time is now, let's get these juveniles jailed and get justice for the ones affected.

There should be no justification. Criminals who commit crimes are criminals, and we should not allow their age to keep them on our streets, living among us and, in many cases, committing additional crimes. Teenagers should be held

accountable for their conduct and tried as adults. If you're scared about the consequences, don't commit the crime. Period.

Here are some statistics from New Zealand.

In 2019 there were 1,503 children and young people in court, and in 2020 there were 1,584 which proves that it is increasing over the years.

Only 20% who committed a serious offence got home detention and were tried as adults. 

In conclusion, evidence proves that juveniles get away with murder and therefore they should be tried adults.

Dame Whina Cooper.

                Who is Dame Whina Cooper?

Dame Whina Cooper was born on the 9th of December 1895.

Dame Whina Cooper is from Te Karaka.

Why is she famous? Dame Whina Cooper is famous for leading the famous 1975 land march. She was also a activist in fighting for Maori land rights. 

Write that Essay Sentence.

The "ed" sentence.

Try starting your sentence with the ed from of the verb it makes for a punchy start to a sentence. 

Remember the rule:  

When you have finished your ed phrase, please a comer then write the rest of the sentence. 

Some -ed words - surprised, acted, angered, possessed, committed, concentrated, undaunted, horrified, petrified , surprised. 

Twisted... Why does my hair tie always get tangled in my hair? Ugh, it is so annoying!

Disadvantaged, but he keeps persevering, hes so small and all the other boys in his team are so big.

 

The "power sentence" 

If you find you waffle, try using a power sentence Begin your paragraph with a power sentence of 12 words or less. Get straight to the point. 
Examples:
Quality coaching is fundamental to sporting success. 
Early starts decrease student learning outcomes. 
What is right, isn’t always popular. 

School is important, you need it for the future.

The ‘Red, White and Blue’ Sentence:

Use the red, white and blue sentence style when you have several ideas to convey about a topic. 

Examples:
Successful students are focused, punctual and hard working. 
The Earth’s key resources are clean air, fresh water and natural environments. 
Sunshine, water and friends make for a perfect weekend adventure.

 

Friendship means, Honesty, Laughter, Emotional Support.

Independent task.

Screaming, so loud... What is happening, darkness surrounds me..

Lurking... A black figure follows me... Hides in the bushes when I turn around.

 

             Mini Open Top Pastry Savouries.

On Friday my team and I made open top savouries! They were so good! I really enjoyed them, I do wish we made more though! I loved all the flavours they have in them.

Ingredients.

Team notes:

I think that me and my team worked pretty well!

Pictures.

Why schools should start at 10 am.

 I believe that schools should start at 10 am because:

Students and teachers wouldn't be as tired. Being less tired means people would be more focused. More focused means more learning.

Teachers and students wouldn’t be so rushed in the morning, which means that people won’t forget stuff, and it’s also better for your mental health.

Having better mental health means that students would get a better view on school and it is also better overall. 

Students would more likely come to school, better attendance. Which also means they will learn more as they are there more of the time.

More learning = better future.

Students will be a lot better, which means they are nicer to teachers and that means that the teachers will be happier and they will be nicer to the students.

Reflection on rubber band cup mover.

                   Rubber band cup mover.

My group and I were unsuccessful of moving the cup, but we did come up with lots of ideas.

 

The IP skill that I used today was…. communication with my team and active listening, listening to there ideas.

Using this IP skill helped to….Get more ideas and working on our ideas. This helped with the activity because…. We needed these skills, otherwise we wouldn't of gotten anything done. Using this IP did not help with the activity today because…. Sometimes we got frustrated with each other.

Today I worked well with…. Dylan and Zoe example of when we worked well together was…. we got lots done on our activity.

If I got to do the activity again, I would….. Try other ideas.

I worked at…...level 4 of Hellison's Behaviour Model. Examples of what I did to show that I worked at this level are... Helped my friends.

Dirty Water, Chemistry.

                              Dirty Water.

The aim of this experiment, is to be able to dilute dirty water to be able to get it to the point were it is drinkable.

Method - 

Make the dirty water. 

use a 250ml beaker and then get 200mls of water.

Add 2 spoonfuls of dirt.

Add 10mls of oil.

Add a spoonful of pebbles.

Stir it for 2 minutes.

Label a piece of paper to keep the beaker on.

Take a photo of the dirty water.

Now we stir the water for a minute, 

measure 100mls of the dirty water and poor it into another beaker. 

Add 100mls of clean water into the dirty water and poor the other dirty water out.

And then repeat again. 

And now we take a picture of the diluted dirty water.

After that we out together this thing together this thing that holds the funnels which we put the filters in for us to pour the diluted dirty water into so that it filters it and we will do that a few times to hopeful help get it to the point were we can drink it.

Here are some pictures of the diluted dirty water, the clean water that got filtered, and the filtering system.

Solute = The dirt in this product.

Solvent = The liquid in the product = The water

Solution = Anything that has had something that has been dissolved in it.

Dissolved = when the solid disappears.

Diluted = When the solution is watered down lots.

Concentrated = When there is lots of solid present. 

Filtrate = The product after it has been filtered - The clean water.

In my opinion it worked very well. The water was completly clear when we filtered it! I wouldn't change anything.. Actually I might change my team, hahaha